Script

Here is my script for a Sequel for the Holiday 

Pictures

Here are my pictures of my field scene,  I have taken them in the afternoon, as the lighting at this time i think is the best it could be, I can also have some shadows of trees in my pictures. I Also like the sun in background it makes it look very romantic. 

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Premises

I had to also make a phone call to the owner of the premises to see if it was alright if i used it for my film studies project.
He was delighted to think that his field was going to be used for something.

I also went to see the man as well and told him what exactly I am going to be doing on the field as well. I also explained some of the pictures i ma going to take just to make sure that I am allowed the pictures that I want to take. The field owner even offered to help me, and if I need him in my film he would be feel honored to be the pictures and film.

Risk assessment

Risk Assessment

While I was taking the pictures for my scenes i noticed a few risks in which I need to overcome while i am on the premises.

• One of my shots is in the road, so I need to make sure that I have some one making sure that there are no cars coming so they do not get in the way of the shot. 
• The field in which my first scene there is barded wire so I need to make sure that there is no barded wire in my scene. Also I need to make sure that my actors are safe to get to my scene.
• Also one of my shots I need to hang out of a window so I need to make sure that I don't lean too far out of the window to prevent me from falling out of the window. 

Ways I can prevent these from happening is making sure that I have extra people just making sure that there are no accidents. Also i will be having a first aid kit on the premises to, I am also a first aider so there is no need to find one. 

Also I am will put out signs around saying that there is filming in progress to stop people form walking around the areas in which I am using. 

Script Read through

Here is the Read through video that I created with Abbie Hales
I decided to do the disruption scene which involves Kate and Jasper. The Dialogue in this scene is really good because is shows the relationship between the characters and it can show there emotions. I also found that the dialogue that I used really moves the story forward. By moving the story forward it makes the audience want to know more about the story and they would like to no more about storyline and the characters.
Abbie says:"More speech would help move the story forward which would help create a stronger relationship between the characters.

Evaluation

I think that my wording needs to be improved to make it sound like a Romantic situation. Also I think I need to add more speech in my script doing this i feel i would be able to create more of a relationship between the characters