Script Read through

Here is the Read through video that I created with Abbie Hales
I decided to do the disruption scene which involves Kate and Jasper. The Dialogue in this scene is really good because is shows the relationship between the characters and it can show there emotions. I also found that the dialogue that I used really moves the story forward. By moving the story forward it makes the audience want to know more about the story and they would like to no more about storyline and the characters.
Abbie says:"More speech would help move the story forward which would help create a stronger relationship between the characters.

Evaluation

I think that my wording needs to be improved to make it sound like a Romantic situation. Also I think I need to add more speech in my script doing this i feel i would be able to create more of a relationship between the characters